Also, on item Number 8, I am not sure I would write "...the TEDIOUS process of making a boot." That is very negative and could suggest that it is boring to make boots. I would substitute something more along the lines of "...demonstrating their skill and craftsmanship in creating a wonderful pair of boots."
After all, if we are going to promote something that has absolutely nothing to do with Victoria, we should at least write positively about it.
Something for everyone that has nothing better to do. Please put me down for no.
You forgot to put a date on the article. I know it will be on Friday and Saturday but which weekend is it? The month would be nice to know also.